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Nighty Night Part 4
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Am I dreaming?
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I was having a hard time focusing on anything.  I thought I heard my friend Cat in the distance…
“you’re a strong woman”….
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“I just want to go home”…..
Was she begging?  I tried to move, but my body wouldn’t respond.  I slightly moved my legs.  My legs felt smooth and caressed in silky satin.
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I heard someone run past me, my eyes were out of focus but getting better.  I saw someone run past me in a bridal satin gown.  Looks like canisters are dropping from the ceiling.  Is that pink gas?
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That looks like Cat putting a pillow over her nose and mouth.  Why is her eyes opening wide?  Why did she gently lay on the bed?  Is that a satin covered bed?  That’s beautiful!  Wait the pink gas is getting close to her! 
I tried to move.  My right arm started to respond. I could move my hand.  I tried desperately to wave to get her attention, but I still lacked the strength to make it actually happen.
Cat gently breathed the gas, her eyes got heavy.  She gently laid back into the bed, her head hit a silky pillow and pink gas poured from the pillow.  Gas engulfed her body….  All I heard was her snoring.
What is this place?  I couldn’t focus.  Pink gas came my way, but it wasn’t affecting me?  I managed to get enough strength to touch my face with my hand.  I tried to touch my mouth.  I felt smooth plastic over my face.  Felt like satin touching my face.  Is that a hose attached to the smooth plastic?  Is this a mask?  Why?  I was so confused.
It started to come back to me…  I was hit with that dart at Cat’s house.  Someone had a pillow. What happened?  I couldn’t remember.
My hand tried to remove the mask.  It wasn’t budging. 
A computerized voice came over a loud speaker.
“Sleeping Gas back online.  Enabling relaxing techniques and deep sleep protocols.”
What?  Wait.  Was I put to sleep at Cat’s?  Wait…  This mask? 
I felt the bed start to vibrate and massage my back. It felt amazing.  The bed I was in felt as if there here hands that started rubbing my silky legs.  Are those real hands rubbing my legs?  I couldn’t look down to see.
I started to feel air hit me in the face from my mask.  My hand gently tugged at it, but it wouldn’t pull away.  It was sealed on my face.  I heard a masculine voice.
“Keep rubbing her legs, the bed is messaging her back. I think the sleeping gas will be coming into the mask any second. You’ll learn quick to put them back to sleep.”
Oh no, they are putting me to sleep! I don’t understand.  I tried to say something.  Anything.  No words would come out. A dark haired man started to come into focus.  He was so handsome!
He took my hand and held it.  “It’s ok sweetie, just a few seconds and you’ll be under our spell.” 
I felt warm hands rubbing my legs, and I felt warm hands massage my chest.  It felt incredible through the satin sheets and my satin sleep shirt.
He handsome man put his palm against my cheek, and took his hand from mine and ran his fingers through my hair. He spread my hair across my silky smooth pillow.
“Keep rubbing her, she’ll go under more gently. Get the camera ready.” The handsome man said smiling at me.
“Here comes the sleeping gas sweetie, time to go under our spell.”
The air pressure intensified in the mask.  It smelled sweet.  I tried to tug at the mask. I didn’t want to be put to sleep.  I managed to get out a sound, “no……….” I begged.
The man stopped rubbing his fingers through my hair and pulled my hand from the mask that was trying to put me to sleep.  “No no no, feel relaxed, gently breathe in the sweet fumes, let us put you to sleep.” 
He held my hand.  He smiled at me.  I gently moved my head left to right to try to shake the mask. My head felt so caressed in the satin pillow.  The mask wasn’t budging. 
I noticed a video camera with a red light on.  I wanted to hold my breath, but I felt so relaxed. 
“Keep rubbing her breasts, she is surrendering.”
I took a breathe of gas, I was feeling distanced.  I wanted to fight.  I truly did. 
The man shushed me saying, “a few more breaths, you’re in the best satin on the planet. Let go. You’ll be fine.  A deep breath is all you need sweetie.  You’re safe, your friends are safe.”
My entire body was relaxed, I did what he asked.  I took my deep breath.  I felt as the gas flowed in my lungs and throughout my body.  I was so silky. His face faded into the distance.  The room grew dark.
“Keep rubbing, her eyes are closing….”
“Sleep my sweet….  Sleeeeppppppp.”
As I faded into silky sleep I heard, “One day left to port, then it’s time for them to enjoy their new lives”….
(snoring begins)


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The concept had potential, but it was badly executed. You should rewrite it adding some real plot. Gassing women repeatedly just for giggles is uninteresting. What are those men's motives?
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