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Nighty Night Part 4

Poll: Switch to a new story plot?
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Continue, but add other ways of putting them to sleep
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Nighty Night Part 4
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03-02-2022, 05:16 PM
The concept had potential, but it was badly executed. You should rewrite it adding some real plot. Gassing women repeatedly just for giggles is uninteresting. What are those men's motives?
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Nighty Night Part 4 - by Ohnosleepinggas - 02-11-2021, 04:43 AM
RE: Nighty Night Part 4 - by Hex123 - 03-02-2022, 05:16 PM

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